For Class of 2024 Seniors

Get Unlimited Support with Your College Application Prompts & Responses

[ Only Available to First 20 Families ]

College Essay Service

Coach Tony here with College Admission Secrets! 🙂

Due to high demand, we are test piloting a brand new service this year for our Class of 2024 high school seniors!

Year after year, parents of Seniors ask us:

“We don’t need the full coaching program, we would just like assistance with their college essays…” OR “Can you just edit their essays?”

For years, we haven’t had the capacity to offer this, but that changes today!

With our incredible team of coaches, we are piloting a brand new service this year to the first 20 families that want to take us up on this offer!

We are offering college essay support via email!

What does it look like?

Your child will email us their college essays (UC Personal Insight Questions, Common App Personal Statements, Common App Supplements, etc.) in an editable Google Doc.

From there, our coaching team will go in & leave comments, feedback and edits in their Google Docs.

Then, our team will record a personalized video response for the student reviewing their comments and provide recommendations to the student for the next round of edits.

Your child will get the edits and personalized video feedback within 24 hours.

From there, your child can create their next draft and resubmit it to us for another round of revisions.

As a special bonus, we will open up one group coaching call with one of our highly-trained coaches for you to attend each week. On these coaching calls, one of our coaches will be available to answer any questions you may have about the college admissions process and there will be opportunity for one or more students to get live edits.

We are offering this service on a weekly, monthly or all-access basis. You can stack these (example: start with one week & purchase another week if needed).

This is the first time that we are offering this, so I am invested in its success. While I will not be running the coaching calls or doing the edits myself, I will be personally closely monitoring the progress and making sure we provide a “WOW!” experience.

Because this is a pilot, we will only offer this service to the first 20 families. Once we hit 20, we will close down this pilot program until next year!

Read the summary below & tap the button to get started ASAP!


  • Unlimited Email Support

  • Up to 4 Prompts/Essays/Responses Revisions Per Day

    • Examples of 4 Revisions:

      • 4 PIQ responses

      • 3 PIQ responses + 1 Personal Statement response

      • 2 PIQ responses + 1 Personal Statement response + 1 Supplement response

      • 1 Personal Statement + 3 Supplement responses

  • Receive Response from our Team Within 1 business day

    • Comments on Student’s Google Doc

    • Personalized Video Response Reviewing the Comments & General Feedback for the Student

    • NOTE: Our team will respond on the weekdays, between Monday to Friday.

  • BONUS: Access to our Weekly Group Coaching Call

    • Can’t make it? No worries! We’ll email out the video replay within 24 hours!


$ 500



$ 1,000


$ 1500

Ready to Get Started?

Frequently Asked Questions:

Nope! Your chosen service duration (1-week, 1-month, or access until 11/30) will start from the moment you email us your initial draft.

That’s correct! If your child submits their email on Monday at 12 PM PST, they will receive an email response back by that following Tuesday by 12 PM PST. 

NOTE: If your student sends us a request on Friday at 5 PM PST, they will receive a response back by Monday by 5 PM PST.

That’s on us! We strive our best to respond to every student within 24 hours. In the rare case that we don’t, we’ll add on 1 additional day to your program so you don’t miss out on any opportunities to get more support!